Spanish English Translation?

hello,

i used a translator first and after i fixed it a little

please help me to fix if it has mistakes.

here is the translation:



you should find a new love that dont keep his problems

which is not like me at time of dinner

that when dies of jealousy he never tells you anything

which dont have like me so many wounds in the soul,



you should find a new love that is all a gentleman

who has a Profession whith out problems money

which is a friend of your friends sympathize with your parents

and that never talk too much and he cant hurt you,

but my life, you always know me and now I have to say I always say what I feel



you will never find someone to watch the stars with

someone who can get off with a kiss one of them

someone who makes you feel to touch the sky with the hands

someone who makes you fly like me you will not find him,



you will never find someone who really loves you

someone who makes you cry of so much love, of so much kisses

someone to walk like two crazies of the hand

someone who makes you Bibra like me you will not find him.



you should find a new love that remember the dates

which is not like me, he always keep his promises

someone who can love you just a little and some part

which is not like me who just live to love you.



but my life, you always know me and now I have to say I always say what I feel

you will never find someone to watch the stars with

someone who can get off with a kiss one of them

someone who makes you feel to touch the sky with the hands

someone who makes you fly like me you will not find him,



you should find a new love that dont keep his problems

which is not like me at time of dinner

that when dies of jealousy he never tells you anything

which dont have like me so many wounds in the soul.





here is the original:



deves buscarte un nuevo amor que no guarde sus problemas

que no sea como yo a la hora de la cena

que cuando muera de celos el jamas te diga nada

que no tenga como yo tantas heridas en el alma,



deves buscarte un nuevo amor que sea todo un caballero

que tenga una profecion sin problemas de dinero

sea amigo de tus amigos simpatice con tus padres

y que nunca hable de mas que no pueda lastimarte,

pero vida me conoces desde siempre y ahora tengo que decir siempre digo lo que siento



que no vas a encontrar nunca con quien mirar las estrellas

alguien que pueda bajarte con un beso una de ellas

alguien que te aga sentir tocar el cielo con las manos

alguien que te aga volar como yo no vas a encontrarlo,



que no vas a encontrar nunca alguien que te ame deberas

alguien que te aga llorar de tanto amar de tantos besos

alguien conquien caminar como 2 locos de la mano

alguien que te aga bibrar como yo no vas a encontrarlo



debes buscarte un nuevo amor que se acuerde de las fechas

que no sea como yo siempre cumpla sus promesas

alguien que pueda quererte solo un poco y sierta parte

que no sea como yo que solo vivo para amarte



pero vida me conoses desde siempre

y ahora tengo que decir siempre digo lo que siento

que no vas a encontrar nunca

alguien que te ame deveras alguien que te aga llorar de tanto amar de tantos besos

alguien conquien caminar como 2 locos de la mano

alguien que te aga bibrar como yo no vas a encontrarlo

deves buscar un nuevo amor

que no guarde sus problemas

que no sea como yo a la hora de la cena

que cuando muera de celos el jamas te diga nada

que no tenga como yo tantas heridas en el alma



and here if you want to hear it:

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thank you so muchSpanish English Translation?
You should look for a new love who doesn't hold his problems in

who is not like me at dinner time

who when he's dying of jealousy never says a word about it

who doesn't have so many wounds in his soul, like me.



You should look for a new love who's a total gentleman

who has a profession without financial problems

who's a friend of your friends and liked by your parents

and never talks about anything that might hurt you.



But my darling, you've known me forever

and now I have to say (I always say what I feel)



that you're never going to find anyone to look at the stars with

anyone who can fetch one down for you with a kiss

anyone who makes you feel you are touching the sky with your hands

anyone who makes you fly the way I do, you're not going to find him.



that you're never going to find anyone who truly loves you,

anyone who makes you cry with so much loving, with so many kisses,

anyone to walk with holding hands like two crazy people

anyone who makes you tremble the way I do, you're not going to find him.



You should look for a new love who remembers anniversaries

who, unlike me, always keeps his promises

someone who can love you only a little and only part-time

who, unlike me, only lives to love you.



But my darling, you've known me forever

and now I have to say (I always say what I feel)



that you're never going to find anyone who truly loves you,

anyone who makes you cry with so much loving, with so many kisses,

anyone to walk with holding hands like two crazy people

anyone who makes you tremble the way I do, you're not going to find him.



You should look for a new love who doesn't hold his problems in

who is not like me at dinner time

who when he's dying of jealousy never says a word about it

who doesn't have so many wounds in his soul, like me.Spanish English Translation?
perfect! proofread and flawlessSpanish English Translation?
No est谩 bien tu traducci贸n, la de RE es correcta, te contesto en espa帽ol porque el texto original est谩 en ese idioma y por cierto muy mal escrito.



Primero trata de mejorar tu espa帽ol antes que querer aprender otro idioma, por favor.

Y espero no tomes mi critica como una agresi贸n, sino como constructiva.



Palabras como: deves, que lo correcto es, debes.

Profecion, que lo correcto es, profesi贸n.

aga, que lo correcto es, haga

deberas, que lo correcto es, deveras.

bibrar, que lo correcto es, vibrar.

conoses, que lo correcto es, conoces.